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Editing Yourself
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Linda Elizabeth Alexander
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Editing Yourself
©2003 Linda Elizabeth Alexander
Not everybody has access to a professional editor.
Sometimes, you're forced to edit your own writing - a
danger some of us know all too well. As soon as you put
those words on the paper, you know you're going to have
some serious work to do later - and editing your own
words can be difficult. Still, there are times when you
will have to edit your own writing. Here are some tips:
Organize
Make your piece flow logically. Readers should not have
to make an effort to understand your writing. Use simple
language and be specific where you can. If you need to
rearrange paragraphs or sentences so that your piece
makes sense, then by all means do it.
Write Concisely
This means keep your sentences short and avoid clutter.
Omit unnecessary words.
Don't be redundant
Avoid redundant phrases like "the sum total."
Don't reveal your outline
Don't say, "I'm going to talk about ..." Just talk about
it. Don't say, "I want to take this opportunity to thank
..." Go ahead and thank them. You don't need permission
and your readers don't need to be warned.
Avoid using jargon
Keep your audience in mind at all times when editing.
Save the jargon for when you and your work buddies talk
shop. Otherwise, you risk alienating readers who don't
understand your jargon.
Use active voice
Use strong, direct words. The active voice tells who did
what. Passive voice avoids specifics.
Examples: The surgery was performed by Dr. Smith.
(passive voice) Change to:
Dr. Smith performed the surgery. (active voice -
clearer, stronger)
Use vivid words
Help readers visualize what you are saying. They will
retain more if they can picture it in their heads.
Vivid, visual words will paint a picture for them,
helping them to "see" what you are saying.
Use plain words with few syllables
Don't try to dazzle your audience with too many big
words. The result will be a cluttered piece that is hard
to navigate. For example, instead of utilize say use.
Use your grammar and spell checkers with caution
Spell checkers are a great invention, but they're not
100 percent reliable. Grammar checkers are especially
suspect since they don't always understand usage. Use
them to double-check your editing, but don't trust them
completely. They just aren't as reliable as your own
brain.
When in doubt, always have another person look at your
work. Not everyone has access to a professional editor
but I'll bet there's a grammar expert sitting just a few
cubicles away from you. Ask her or him for help before
finalizing your edits.
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